Starting to look a lot better. the cover and back spread don't look as childish anymore, which is what I needed to get away from! (it wasn't what i was trying to (portray at all!) The colour in the back ground of the 1st and last spread is alright actually I don't mind it, it makes you feel calm when looking at it, although would like to try out a few different colours to see if it will change the mood much.
'serene cafes' needs to be changed after talking with Fay I realised this. Serene needs to be emphasised a lot more, and maybe completely take out the 'cafes' altogether. Composition wise it is working a lot better on the front spread, Its my favourite composition through the brochure and showing this on the front spread does a lot of good for my over all brochure, creating something that someone might actually want to take a look at.
I have also entered in some paragraph styles into my whole body of text, which is looking way better, playing around with indenting as well, works well for my spread.
Needed to change the quotes on the reviews page as Fay and Matt hated the quotations being bigger than the actual text, which in actual fact when printed it looked terrible! (looked better in my mind)
Happy with the progress!
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